Alright nice piece I love the pattern on her clothing and the head ornaments are a very cool touch. The face and hair are good so change nothing there.

Ok first off when you scanned this in you scanned it in there must have been an air bubble because you have a grey patch right above the head. If this drawing is in a sketchbook make sure the book as flat as it can be. IF the sketch book is spiral bound then tear the SOB off and scan it then.
You say you have problems with hands well I can relate to that. Me and about 500 million other artists out there. Hands are the hardest part of the human body to get right. There are entire classes just for hands and the head. I took 4 that dealt with hands. Anatomy, Intermediate Anatomy, Heads and Hands 1& 2. SO don’t feel bad just because they aren’t perfect. In time you will see them for what they are. SHAPES.
Her left arm is pretty good the only thing is continue the crease line from her thumb back toward her wrist a little more. You know that crease that separates your thumb from your first finger make that a little longer.
Next look at the back of your hand then at her right hand. NOTE that the wrist is smaller then the knuckle area. Also NOTE that the knuckles are not lined up in a straight line they are at an angle. The first and middle finger protrude out the most and the others are a little farther back. Look at your own hand and you will see what I mean.
Now what is really throwing your drawing off is the ball of energy. If I understand it correctly she is cradling the energy in between her hands. WELL that is not what it looks like. And it is not because of the hands, but rather the cloth behind it. The sleeve is over the wrist which means it is exactly where the right hand is. There fore the energy can’t be in front of the sleeve. The sleeve and the energy should be occupying the same space. SO move the sleeve farther back up the arm and all should be well.
Nice going I hope this helped but if you need me to explain it in a different way don’t hesitate.

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THANK YOU VERY MUCH for the great critique!!!!

Hehe, actually what I meant about my hands becoming an epic failure I mean my actual hands, they're not obeying my brain... But still I'm glad you noticed that my weakness is hands and you gave me such a good tip about it!

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Worry not young one. For time will givith thee... Ok I'm going to stop talking ancient Brit.
Time is on your side. What you are doing with out even knowing is creating muscle memory. After hundreds of hours drawing certain things become automatic. Your muscles will know how to draw it with out you thinking about it.
THAT, MY FRIEND, IS WHY WE PRACTICE!!

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Then I'll have to draw everyday if that's what it takes for me to perfect those hands and sometimes feet! WILLPOWER!!!!!!

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LOL.

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Keep your mind open and everything else in perspective.

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ITASAKUSASU first fanfic: [link]
If you have the time, check out my gallery! I like to do detailed art